The plan perfectly fit, I look for an easy target, grab the bag and run in the opposite direction.
I ran as fast as I could after stealing the woman’s purse who was carelessly window shopping.
She shouted louder than I thought, barely 200 meters away I turned behind and saw a young boy running towards me.
He caught up with me in no time and grabbed the purse and ran back to the woman as I fell on the ground with his strong punch.
The woman looked relieved of the thought of getting her bag when I saw him run past her in full speed making me nothing but jealous of his intelligent plan.
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After choosing Happiness, Joyful would be an overkill for me, I ain’t that overtly always in a happy state person. So the next option was jealous, it is said that this emotion can burn relationships….I definitely didn’t want a negative take on it so the one above. Am sure Shashank would have a very unique take on the emotion, to read the best hop on here.
I had been to a flower garden near lake Konstance called the Mainau Island and I saw and clicked of course the best of orchids and tulips I could. Post pending once I get through the challenge.
ROFL… simply lovedddd it Shweta! I didn’t see it coming at all!! Hugs my dear girl! Well done 🙂 one of my favs of your stories!
Thanks Archana, happy that it lands in one of my best works as this genre is so new to me 🙂
Ha ha ha ha 😀 .. now that’s clever 😀 😛
Super intelligent plan isn’t it 🙂
Indeed, indeed 😀 😀
😀 Great stuff Shweta 😀
Thank you babe 🙂
I saw it coming not because I am clever BUT because I know YOU !! :p 😛
This one cemented may faith that I know you (kuch to :))
in real life I would have been equally bewildered but here, I Know my girl 🙂
love and love 🙂
And I couldnt be more glad than knowing that you saw it coming because you know me 🙂 It gives a super satisfied feeling that you exist somewhere in my reach and I turn to you because you understand me!! my bestie….super hugs 🙂 (now am emo…damn)
<3 🙂
Poor woman 🙁 She should have done shopping instead of getting mugged 😀
Only a woman can feel bad for missing out on shopping lol 🙂 loved your comment Roohi 🙂
Good One ! I like the twists in your plots. Great !
Thank you Aditya, your comments motivate me for better twists.
poor fellow!!!
haha Aroraji, you bet 🙂
haha.. now, now, i m not sure who to pity on at the end 😀 Wonderful j plus Mainau island must have sth incredible in the store for us, I am sure!
Pity and you….seriously, am sure you laughed your butt out on it 🙂 Mainau island coming soon j 🙂
Haha .what an end! Its an art to narrate a story in 5 sentences and put a twist in it.:-) Look forward to your post on orchids and tulips. .
Thank you Somali, FSF can be challenging…somehow got a hang of it 🙂 Yes I need to post that soon, its a beautiful place and I was fortunate to go in Spring 🙂
:-P…that was really a well-executed plan… 😀
Super na bestie 🙂 I knew you would like it 🙂
Hahaha. Very intelligent fellow.
Truly 🙂
Hahah!
Such a brilliantly crafted story, Shweta. 🙂
Thank you Dee 🙂 super happy you liked it 🙂
LOL. Oh, I feel truly sorry for the woman, but I can’t stop laughing!
It was a loss loss situation for the woman 🙁 happy it made you laugh 🙂
Ha ha ha ..Were the two in nexus with each other? 🙂
You should seriously start writing a novel now…
If the two were in next the guy wouldn’t be jealous isn’t it Utpal 🙂 Well novel will happen soon 🙂
a story in five sentences and that too with a twist! awesome!
Five sentence as a change to writing may be a good one 🙂 give it a try you would like it Joe 🙂
Very intelligent turn to the mini tale!
Thank you Uppalji 🙂 glad you liked it 🙂
Unexpected ending… that’s why it was strong. Wonderful Shweta!
Thank you Tara, that is what I like about five sentence fiction, it gives me a chance to add my twists 🙂
Just wow!
Thanks Rakesh 🙂
Expert of short stories. Nice one. Good plot.
Thank you Abhijit ji, happy you liked it 🙂
Wow! that took me unawares….what an ending..phew..loved it as always!
the phew came with so much running in the story 🙂 I like surprising you with the twists babe 🙂
Another uber-cool short story by you and the ending swayed me away.. kudos 🙂
Thank you Maitreni, glad you liked it 🙂
Haha..!! This was nice and funny 🙂
Thank you Rajiv, happy you like it 🙂
Welcome 🙂
Intelligent plan (of the urchin) or intelligent concept (of the writer)?
Wonderful, Shweta, as always 🙂
Thank you Amitji, feels nice you noticed the writing wit 🙂
wonderful story 🙂 !!
Thanks Sweta, happy you liked it 🙂
Hahahahaah wonderful !! I like it 🙂
Thank you Bhavik 🙂
Nice one good plot.
Thank you 🙂
Hahaha, poor her…i thought it was a great story, turned out to be superb!
My smile receded when I read I thought it was a great story and then I was grinning when I read superb now that was a twist in the tale Alok 🙂
Nice twist in the tale:)
Thank you Lata, happy you liked it 🙂
Really nice and unexpected, Shweta. I am visiting your blog after a long time and as usual, loved what I read 🙂
Thank you Nimi, have missed you on the blogosphere…glad to have you back, running to your blog now 🙂 Thank you so much for liking the story 🙂
Whoa! This is unexpected. Poor woman!
Ah, what a plot. Loved it. 🙂
thank you but this post is so old Bikash 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂