The plan perfectly fit, I look for an easy target, grab the bag and run in the opposite direction.
I ran as fast as I could after stealing the womanβs purse who was carelessly window shopping.
She shouted louder than I thought, barely 200 meters away I turned behind and saw a young boy running towards me.
He caught up with me in no time and grabbed the purse and ran back to the woman as I fell on the ground with his strong punch.
The woman looked relieved of the thought of getting her bag when I saw him run past her in full speed making me nothing but jealous of his intelligent plan.
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After choosing Happiness, Joyful would be an overkill for me, I ain’t that overtly always in a happy state person. So the next option was jealous, it is said that this emotion can burn relationships….I definitely didn’t want a negative take on it so the one above. Am sure Shashank would have a very unique take on the emotion, to read the best hop on here.
I had been to a flower garden near lake Konstance called the Mainau Island and I saw and clicked of course the best of orchids and tulips I could. Post pending once I get through the challenge.
ROFL… simply lovedddd it Shweta! I didn’t see it coming at all!! Hugs my dear girl! Well done π one of my favs of your stories!
Thanks Archana, happy that it lands in one of my best works as this genre is so new to me π
Ha ha ha ha π .. now that’s clever π π
Super intelligent plan isn’t it π
Indeed, indeed π π
π Great stuff Shweta π
Thank you babe π
I saw it coming not because I am clever BUT because I know YOU !! :p π
This one cemented may faith that I know you (kuch to :))
in real life I would have been equally bewildered but here, I Know my girl π
love and love π
And I couldnt be more glad than knowing that you saw it coming because you know me π It gives a super satisfied feeling that you exist somewhere in my reach and I turn to you because you understand me!! my bestie….super hugs π (now am emo…damn)
<3 π
Poor woman π She should have done shopping instead of getting mugged π
Only a woman can feel bad for missing out on shopping lol π loved your comment Roohi π
Good One ! I like the twists in your plots. Great !
Thank you Aditya, your comments motivate me for better twists.
poor fellow!!!
haha Aroraji, you bet π
haha.. now, now, i m not sure who to pity on at the end π Wonderful j plus Mainau island must have sth incredible in the store for us, I am sure!
Pity and you….seriously, am sure you laughed your butt out on it π Mainau island coming soon j π
Haha .what an end! Its an art to narrate a story in 5 sentences and put a twist in it.:-) Look forward to your post on orchids and tulips. .
Thank you Somali, FSF can be challenging…somehow got a hang of it π Yes I need to post that soon, its a beautiful place and I was fortunate to go in Spring π
:-P…that was really a well-executed plan… π
Super na bestie π I knew you would like it π
Hahaha. Very intelligent fellow.
Truly π
Hahah!
Such a brilliantly crafted story, Shweta. π
Thank you Dee π super happy you liked it π
LOL. Oh, I feel truly sorry for the woman, but I can’t stop laughing!
It was a loss loss situation for the woman π happy it made you laugh π
Ha ha ha ..Were the two in nexus with each other? π
You should seriously start writing a novel now…
If the two were in next the guy wouldn’t be jealous isn’t it Utpal π Well novel will happen soon π
a story in five sentences and that too with a twist! awesome!
Five sentence as a change to writing may be a good one π give it a try you would like it Joe π
Very intelligent turn to the mini tale!
Thank you Uppalji π glad you liked it π
Unexpected ending… that’s why it was strong. Wonderful Shweta!
Thank you Tara, that is what I like about five sentence fiction, it gives me a chance to add my twists π
Just wow!
Thanks Rakesh π
Expert of short stories. Nice one. Good plot.
Thank you Abhijit ji, happy you liked it π
Wow! that took me unawares….what an ending..phew..loved it as always!
the phew came with so much running in the story π I like surprising you with the twists babe π
Another uber-cool short story by you and the ending swayed me away.. kudos π
Thank you Maitreni, glad you liked it π
Haha..!! This was nice and funny π
Thank you Rajiv, happy you like it π
Welcome π
Intelligent plan (of the urchin) or intelligent concept (of the writer)?
Wonderful, Shweta, as always π
Thank you Amitji, feels nice you noticed the writing wit π
wonderful story π !!
Thanks Sweta, happy you liked it π
Hahahahaah wonderful !! I like it π
Thank you Bhavik π
Nice one good plot.
Thank you π
Hahaha, poor her…i thought it was a great story, turned out to be superb!
My smile receded when I read I thought it was a great story and then I was grinning when I read superb now that was a twist in the tale Alok π
Nice twist in the tale:)
Thank you Lata, happy you liked it π
Really nice and unexpected, Shweta. I am visiting your blog after a long time and as usual, loved what I read π
Thank you Nimi, have missed you on the blogosphere…glad to have you back, running to your blog now π Thank you so much for liking the story π
Whoa! This is unexpected. Poor woman!
Ah, what a plot. Loved it. π
thank you but this post is so old Bikash π happy you liked it π