Embraced bare in rain
Head on his chest, drops trickled
Heard my name beat in, ā¤§ā¤ ā¤§ā¤
The Katauta is an unrhymed japanese form consisting of 17 or 19 syllables. The poem is a three-lined poem the following syllable counts: 5/7/5 or 5/7/7.
The Katauta form was used for poems addressed to a lover. A single katauta is considered incomplete or a half-poem, however, a pair of katautas using the syllable count of 5,7,7 is called a sedoka.
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Lovely. nothing like listening to a beating heart đ
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Seena
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so wish to hear it again and again Seena đ
Rain is romantic anyway. And your lines make it more so.
thank you sir…happy you liked it đ
very romantic.
thank you đ
Nice poem/Katauta. The use of Hindi made it even more beautiful.
thank you Kishor glad you liked it đ
The rain, and your poem! Your words paint a romantic picture. Lovely, Shweta.
thank you Kiran very happy you liked it đ
So nice
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Liked the use of Hindi Dhak Dhak đ
added fuel to fire hehe…thank you so much đ
Sometimes it is a very strong healer đ
a lover’s hug anytime Anjali đ
Very sweet and romantic.
thank you Aditya đ
A very romantic and nice haiku! đ
thank you….coming from you means a lot Prakash đ
Glad to know about ‘katauta’, Shweta, thank you!
I knew about sedoka though..
Loved the height of romance in your katauta.
And the ‘dhak-dhak’ is the icing on the cake đ (unaffected by the rain and trickle :))
wow when I get this kind of appreciation from great poet like yourself it’s quiet heartening đ
New Form of poetry ! Never heard about it earlier !!
nice đ
That’s an amazing one! Liked the ending ā¤§ā¤ ā¤§ā¤ đ
thank you Arun happy you liked it đ
Very VERYYYYYYYYYyyyyyyyyy romantic đ
hahahah thank you Bikramjit đ
ooh , nice. And Romantic đ
thank you Ami, glad you liked it đ
Duet of raindrops and heartbeats is highly intoxicating. Great romantic lines, Shweta đ
making a comment so romantic is super play of words in itself Ravish đ thank you đ
I didn’t know about this form of poetry, but I don’t know about much poetry anyway! Loved the thought behind it, though!
try it Rakesh am sure you will be awesome đ thank you đ
That’s an unknown form to me…poetry and passion..lethal combo.
thank you Chaitali, it surely is đ
Very romantic đ
thank you Purba đ
After reading all article here sunshineandzephyr, Post like these harmonizing perfect tone.
Thanks
thank you mam,,,glad you liked it đ
Wow! That’s so romantic!
thank you Srivi đ
A form of poetry I’ve never heard of ! Lovely poem…Thanks for sharing !
very happy you liked it đ
Very nice…
thank you đ
beautifully written, loved the emotions in it
thank you Cifar happy you liked it đ
Very interesting and better than a duet in rain:)
rightly so Rahul, happy you liked it đ
It’s beautifully penned. Rains are so romantic and you have portrayed it in a beautiful way.
thank you Felicia…really happy you liked it đ
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Very nice….
thank you đ
Romantic soul-sis!
Nice to be introduced to a new form of poetry đ
welcome soul-sis…how have you been đ
Poignant lines.
thanks đ
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Really Good Lines #Shweta Keep it up.
thank you Lalit..happy you liked it đ
Really Good Lines #Shweta Ji Keep it up.
Very nice and romantic:-)
thank you so much đ
Today I read it again. Still loved it.
hahah keep coming đ
a nice poem indeed!
thank you Binod đ
He Shweta, Beautiful depiction of love in your own words.
Keep it up.
Jas
Lovely and romantic creation…. short and perfect one… đ
thank you so much Ashish đ its so good to have you here đ
Touching !
Beautiful – love the simplicity !
Very sweet and romantic poem.