Home > hindi > Poem > Poetry > निशब्ध प्यार निशब्ध प्यार Shweta Dave July 16, 20152015-07-16T11:11:13+00:002015-07-16T11:16:12+00:00 hindi, Poem, Poetry 44 Comments An innovative concept brought in by my blogger friend Ravish where he challenged us few bloggers to write on a audio prompt. This is the second prompt of the challenge. Image source: Giphy Tweet Pin It About The Author shweta.dave09 44 Comments July 16, 2015 Bhavikk Shah wow shweta u literally give words to human emotions .the feeling & expression of love is described brilliantly and beautifully.. secondly I would like to compliment Ravishji on creating this serene clip and on which Shweta ur creativity is – “Masha Allah” Beautiful – simply superb 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 Shweta Dave Thank you so so much Bhavik for liking it…really happy you found it beautiful 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 Aniruddha Shrivastava Beautifully penned. Liked it a lot 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 Shweta Dave Thank you Aniruddha 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 Maitreni Mishra Wow Shweta, this seems mesmerizing… so beautifully penned down and kudos to Ravish for bringing it up for you to do it… Lovely indeed and I’m gonna ask my Mom as well to come & give it a read, I’m sure she’d love it too <3 Hugs! Reply July 17, 2015 Shweta Dave Thank you Maitreni, I would be very happy to get Sangeeta’s thoughts on this too 🙂 Ravish has indeed given us a gem of a track 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 MP UPPAL A honeyed expression and so lyrical! Reply July 17, 2015 Shweta Dave Thank you Uppalji 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 Amit Agarwal Fluidity of the stream and spontaneity of the cloud in your lovely verse, Shweta:) Reply July 17, 2015 Shweta Dave Shukriya Amitji 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 Kokila Gupta first of all I must say that this prompt is so beautiful … I was mesmerized by it and then you have done wonders to its beauty dear .. Loved it bestie 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 Shweta Dave So agree bestie…I wanted this track to never stop and was delighted to know that Ravish assembled it himself! Thank you so so much for loving it muahh 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 Somali K Chakrabarti Beautiful, mesmerizing.Am really running short of words for praise Shweta. Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Thank you so much Somali ….super happy you liked it 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 yogi saraswat बहुत बहुत शानदार शब्द श्वेता जी ! हिंदी कविता में भी आप श्रेष्ठ हैं ! सुन्दर सृजन Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Shukriya Yogiji, bohot bohot shukriya 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 Vishal Grover श्वेता, इस कविता रचना ने दिल को छू लिया. बादल और झरने के रिश्ते का इतना सुंदर वर्णन. वाह! प्रकृति प्रमियों के लिए आपकी तरफ से यह बहुत सुंदर उपहार है! अनेकों धन्यवाद इस अती सुंदर कृति के लिए! आपकी कलम में जादू है! 🙂 Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Shukriya Vishal….my heart is filled with so much happiness to see that you liked the poem so much. When human beings love it could be conditional or some other emotions mixed with love….but nature has no conditions…its love in its purest form giving and unconditional. Reply July 17, 2015 Ashish Kumar heart touching poem… apki ye kavita mantra-mugdha karne layak hai… atyant hi sundar rachna… shabdon ka aisa uttam aur anupam upyog kabhi kabhi hi dekhne ko milta hai… You have the power to create beautiful words and with the help of that you create beautiful and an everlasting creation as you have done in this epic poem… There are few works which creates an everlasting impact on readers memory which remains forever… and your this poem belongs to that category… Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Compliments from a poet are like wow….thank you so so much Ashish 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂 Reply July 17, 2015 Maniparna Sengupta Majumder Beautifully composed, bestie…. I’m really overwhelmed by the lyrical aspect of it..one of your best creations… 🙂 Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Thank you bestie, if you say one of my best then it surely must be…and motivated to do better hugs 🙂 Reply July 18, 2015 Sangeeta Mishra Very beautiful verse Shweta. The flow of your words very well compliments the fluidity of the stream and adds definition and harmony to the sound clip. Indeed beautiful selection of words. Your poem touches the zenith of romantic poetry. Kudos. 🙂 Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Am so happy and touched firstly a warm welcome to my blog Sangeeta and secondly this appreciation coming from an amazing poetess as yourself means so much to me. Thank you so so much for liking it 🙂 Reply July 18, 2015 Lata Subramanian Beautiful….both the prompt and the response Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Thank you Lata, glad you liked it 🙂 Reply July 18, 2015 DEESHANI BATRA (DB) Wow! Such a beautiful take on the prompt. Loved how you’ve made it so lyrical. 🙂 Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Thank you Deeshani, happy happy you liked it 🙂 Reply July 18, 2015 Purba Chakraborty Oh my God! Shweta, this poem is so mesmerizing and romantic that I can’t explain it in words. The way you observed the elements of Nature and beautified them with your thoughts is beyond amazing. Loved your thought process. This was one of the best poems I have read in a long long time. Thank you so much for writing this. Hugs for such a marvelous creation. Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Every time I read your comment I am all smiles…that’s the love you spread Purba. Thank you so much for liking it so much. It is a big compliment to hear that it moved you after a long time 🙂 Hug to you too babe 🙂 Reply July 19, 2015 Ravish Mani Shweta, it really needs courage to comment on a legendary piece like this. You have taken love to another level. It’s indeed a soulful composition. It has the potentiality to transport a human being from ordinary plane to higher levels, if meditate on it heartedly. I truly agree with Maniparna. It’s your one of the Best. 🙂 Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave The magic of your prompt, the amazing assembling of soulful music has got this creation Ravish. I loved the music composition so much that I did not want it to stop. simply splendid and kudos to you my friend. Now to the poem, well thank you so so much that I could match up to the music 🙂 Love is the epitome its me may be who rose to another step to feel the emotion 🙂 I am liking the concept a lot….keep them coming 🙂 Reply July 19, 2015 Ankionthemove very beautiful poetry! Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Thank you so much 🙂 Reply July 20, 2015 MS Mahwar Very Beautiful Poem! Reply July 20, 2015 Shweta Dave Thanks M.S. 🙂 Reply July 21, 2015 Rahul बहुत सुंदर श्वेता:) Reply July 21, 2015 Shweta Dave Shukriya Rahul 🙂 Reply July 21, 2015 Saru This is beautiful beyond words. Mazza aa gaya padh kar! Reply September 16, 2015 Shweta Dave wah thank you Basanti…I would love to call you by this name 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂 Reply July 22, 2015 Rakesh Kaushik प्रशंसनीय Reply September 16, 2015 Shweta Dave Shukriya Rakesh 🙂 Reply July 28, 2015 Leena Walawalkar Hey hi there Shweta! I have recently started discovering absolutely stunning poets as yourself, and I’m truly loving the experience of reading beautiful Hindi poetry..keep it going girl! http://blahblahofthemind.blogspot.sg Reply September 16, 2015 Shweta Dave Thank you so much Leena, happy you liked it 🙂 Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Name (required) Email (required) Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. Related Posts Happiness – A Haiku Yeh Nayan Dare Dare Love Seasons – A poem Dinner Time – 33 words poem!