I know the theme is 5 sentence fiction and EmoIntel but when the letter L came and the emotion was Love there was no intelligence to it, I knew no other definition of Love but to give, to surrender all to Love. It was never to acquireΒ or own, if things work give love, if there are differences then give more love, if two souls are purely in love with no vested interests or conditions giving surely works. Call me primitive but I need no space of my own in love, suffocate me and let me belong….dedicated to all those who have felt truly in love or loved even once in life.
AmΒ expecting a pure as a melody post from Shashank on the same emotion, click here to read his form.
46 Comments
That’s really sweet and extraordinary presentation of Love. Great!.
Thank you Aditya, true love needs no definition.
That’s a soulful piece you got there, Shweta.
I am not able to come back everyday to read your posts, Shweta, but I will give my time to read all the posts when I have enough time on my hand, even if it’s after the challenge. π
I so understand it can get busier at times, you are most welcome anytime to visit, read and share your thoughts Vinitha π treasure them a lot π
quite a Q & A session
indeed Aroraji π
Hello, stopping in from A to Z and thanks for your continued participation!
Stephen Tremp
A to Z Cohost
M is for Movies
Hey Stephen, thanks for stopping by well seems like I will keep myself motivated to finish the challenge I have taken π Good to see ya!
Oh wow! but I need no space of my own in love, suffocate me and let me belongβ¦.dedicated to all those who have felt truly in love or loved even once in life. Just Wow!
Old school π am really happy you liked it, like really happy π
A beautiful one Shweta. Beauty is an understatement, I love the use of words, the innocence of love and the tone of this post.. Simply beautiful π
Thanks Vinay for such a sweet comment, very happy you liked it π
beautiful Shweta π
Well Shweta is beautiful nai lolz, kidding thanks babe, happy you liked it π
The image, your words both were intense and full of love…
Thanks buddy, happy you liked it π
Passionate!!
Thank you Deepak, tumka avadla maka khoob khushi jhaali. π
Lovely Shweta.. π
Thank you Uttpal π
This is so intensely romantic, Shweta. Beautifully written π
Thanks Purba, happy you liked it π
Hi Shweta
The Poem is beautiful especially the narration is so very true..love is divine..pure & immortal..
Love is to give without expectation ….very superbly writtien Shweta..
do keep on great… I liked it π
Keep smiling π
Thank you Bhavikk, tamne gamyu is like super cool π so agree no expectation, no condition no need to win or own….so is love.
Your takes on ‘Love’ always are so romantic! Love is like that…it just gives us the pleasure of loving one and being loved..it’s an ethereal feeling. Wonderfully done dear… <3
wow such amazing words from my best friend means a lot, thanks Maniparna…motivated to do better π
I will say this again Ananya. Words are the most powerful but then there are times you know no matter how good use you make of them.. they will fall short and this is the most powerful piece I have read. Elegant, lovely, so beyond everything. Loads and loads in this post! Beyond mortal indeed..
Such words come to me when the feeling erupts from the deepest core of my heart and says the feeling needs words, an expression to convey what it means to love and be loved even if its only to give π Won’t say a thank you to this one j, it will shorten the expression.
This is a touch of romance, passion, purity and sweetness all at once. Loved reading it:)
Thank you Sarah, glad you liked it.
I jus love romance n u bring out the best in it 1
Thanks babe, super happy you liked it π
Love the emotion…
Thank You Sunaina, happy you liked it π
This is simply beautiful – pure and divine.
Thanks Saru, coming from you who is beautiful with words means so much, thanks once again π
very beautiful Shweta π
Thank you so much π
You took my heart away with your lines. Loved it. Love is truly divine.
Wow, very happy you liked it so much Namrata π
now that is a new way of narration..quite different but nice
Thank you Sweta, super happy you liked it π
Beyond words Shweta! I simply felt the poem.
Thank you Moon, glad you liked it babe!
Lovely Shweta.. π
Thank you π