‘There it is! Cliff we saw in the marvellous picture online!” he pointed, as they hiked to the summit to click the best picture!
She adjusted her tripod facing the sunset, he closed in behind her with devious intentions. Finally he would get rid of her!
He readied himself to give her a push, she bent on one knee as he had taught her the best angle for shots.
A slip and he tumbled sliding down, he held her hand. She left his to get the best action shot of a man falling off a cliff. Karma pays, she smiled. 
Photo Credit: Danny Bowman
This piece of 100 words is written for Friday Fictioneers.
33 Comments
Well. She was one step ahead of him! Makes me wonder why they were together if they detested each other so much.
Sometimes you have no choice and are tied together! Welcome to my blog!
Well written story. It sounds like these two should have found two other travelling companions before the feelings between them bot this bad.
Now thats a great plot for a sequel π thank you so much! Welcome to my blog!
Certainly, Karma works its way. Nice story, Shweta!
Thank you Bushra, glad you liked it π
Nice one
Thanks π
Nice story. You should title “Death in paradise”.
Thats a super catchy title, thank you for liking it sir π
Ouch! Beware of the karma bus. It can run you over when it comes calling. Nice one.
Thank you so much Subroto, happy you liked it and welcome to my space!
I hope you are planning a follow-up about the Karma that overtook him. Nice take.
hehe depends on Rochelle’s next prompt! Would like a sequel myself! Welcome to sunshineandzephyr!
Indeed Karma pays! Beautiful narration!
You bet Savita, glad you liked it π
Hahaha! That was very satisfying. π
I loved your version to the prompt as well. Welcome to sunshineandzephyr π
Grim and ironic. Those twists are the mainstay of flash fiction and you seem to be in control.
Thank you so much….love flash fiction!
As usual with your stories ” Perfect Shot” has the perfect crisp end!
hahaha thank you for appreciating it π I love the twists!
A not-so-familiar tale, he got what he deserved βΊοΈ
Totally and she knew it as well!
Dark and eerie, sent a chill down my spine. Fabulous take, Shweta!
Thank you so much Arti for liking it π
Dear Shweta,
Karma certainly paid in the end. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Hello Rochelle, I am so happy to see your comment! It is my first of Friday Fictioneers and it felt like a family when I hopped on to read others work on the prompt. Happy to receive this warm welcome!
Karma pays! Nicely penned β€
Beautiful presentation…Touchy story and apt. title.
Well written.I hope she got her action shot!
Woah! A terrific suspense that ends in the most thrilling manner.
Nice post, things explained in details. Thank You.