Tried my hand at Triolet.ย A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines. Hope you like it ๐
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Nice poem… Yet the lines came to my mind “Better to have loved and lost rather than not to have loved at all”
not causing hurt again and again it is indeed good to love than not love at all ๐
Nice poem and innovative style too
thank you so much ๐
Very well composed Shweta.
thank you Indrani, happy you liked it ๐
Good one.
Thank you Arun ๐
A fascinating metre indeed!
…and your astounding thought combined with stunning selection of words has done wonders to it ๐
Lovely work, Shweta!
Thank you Amitji, it is awesome to see such appreciation from you ๐
Quite an innovative style Shweta, I like it. Very beautifully composed too ๐
Thank you Maitreni, really happy you liked it ๐
very well composed words Shweta ji !!
thank you Yogiji, happy you liked it ๐
That’s the mysticism of love ๐
Beautifully written, Shweta. Liked the rhyme too ๐
Thank you Ravish, happy you liked it ๐
Beautifully penned!
I had no clue about Triolet, so I learnt something new as well ๐
thank you Arun, happy you liked it ๐
wahhh khub saras.. brilliant….dil ni vytha saras varnavi che ..
brilliantly written … and thanks for the new form of poetry ๐
Take care and Keep smiling ๐
sacchej dil ni vyatha, when do i get to read a poem from you ๐
Nice work. Learned something new today ๐
Have a great day!
nice give it a try, how have you been ๐
Lovely! ๐
thank you ๐
wow ,amazing and simple
thank you ๐
This one is amazing Shweta. I loved it. Gotta try Triolet soon ๐ x
Thank you, sure looking forward to read your take ๐
beautiful thought, nice style, fantastic presentation and so on…
thank you so much Jyotirmoy, really happy you liked it ๐
Beautiful poem ๐
thank you ๐
Very exquisite and intense at the same time. Touched my heart. ๐
thank you Raj, happy you liked it ๐
amazing poem ๐
thank you:)
Loved the form of this poem…!! But guarding heart only as much that it does not break you lest you may not experience the joy of a boding sorrow…hehe… I guess I have garbled the poem. Excuse my interpretations, dear Poetess ๐
agree very well agree with you Bushra, it’s only not letting people take advantage of our bare soul ๐
The rhythm in the form is easygoing and that has given your poem a sweet and swift flow. Beautifully penned, bestie…the emotions the heart experiences… ๐
yayii thank you for liking it, do try this form, would love to read it ๐
Beautifully written. Emotional and thoughtful.
thank you so much Swati, happy you liked it ๐
Ah, Shweta, people who build walls around their heart live a little less
Sometimes for some people it is important not to bare it all and have them hurt us again and again ๐
Very thoughtful and appealing ๐
Thank you ๐
Beautiful ๐
thank you Reshma ๐
Difficult style of poetry I must say…Liked your attempt…..:)
A unique form of poetry! Must try my hand at it and see, I hope with no frown, how the love can drown.
Sweet ๐
Very nicely penned Shweta. Strong emotions woven with beautiful words. ?