Dark is always beautiful, Shweta. How can you describe something, which absorbs all the hues of life, still retains its originality? It’s somber, permanent and captivating. I love black, which is not even a color in itself, but has the power to absorb all of them.
Thanks, Shweta, for celebrating my come back. It’s really a delightful feeling. And you beautifully presented the inner turmoil. Loved the choice of words, especially triumph and conquer. π
Beautiful! You’ve yet again managed to pack the inner fight and so much more. These words flow with one of the deepest feelings lurking in the corners unknown. So beautiful and positive Ananya, how you’ve described it. Glad to see you continue holding your magic wand J Now, waiting for a fiction!
Ananya is beautiful and positive j, yes I do have a magic wand maango jo chahiye Shashank. Fiction is on its way j π And thank you so much for motivating me to give my best π
Glad to see Ravish is recovering and back π you can say the same for me sort of π
and loved your poem (special mention the last one ) though as always wishing it to be conquered ! :/
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you mean Ravish, he wasnt too well and had to keep away from reading and writing.But am glad he is back…we can’t have friends go away for long! Thank you so much happy you liked the poem Saru π
As usual.. Dark and beautiful!
Very few great souls find dark beautiful so thank you so much for liking it Rakesh π
Dark is always beautiful, Shweta. How can you describe something, which absorbs all the hues of life, still retains its originality? It’s somber, permanent and captivating. I love black, which is not even a color in itself, but has the power to absorb all of them.
Ahem! Great souls! Heh heh! π
well I like black too….it’s real and thus may be beautiful. It is a different thing that people enjoy artificial more these days….great soul!!
Agree, Shweta. Totally agree.
Thanks, Shweta, for celebrating my come back. It’s really a delightful feeling. And you beautifully presented the inner turmoil. Loved the choice of words, especially triumph and conquer. π
You are most welcome Ravish, it was my pleasure to write on the prompt π thank you so much for liking it π
Beautiful! You’ve yet again managed to pack the inner fight and so much more. These words flow with one of the deepest feelings lurking in the corners unknown. So beautiful and positive Ananya, how you’ve described it. Glad to see you continue holding your magic wand J Now, waiting for a fiction!
Ananya is beautiful and positive j, yes I do have a magic wand maango jo chahiye Shashank. Fiction is on its way j π And thank you so much for motivating me to give my best π
Beautiful as always – showing the persistent struggle.
thank you so much Somali, happy you liked it π
Yes, there is a lot to conquer, never bowed, never fade
absolutely Datta, so rightly said π
very beautifully penned swthrt <3
thank you so much Roma π
nice fire concept of good & evil π
Thank you so much Sowmya π
Amazing!
thanks Arun π
Glad to see Ravish is recovering and back π you can say the same for me sort of π
and loved your poem (special mention the last one ) though as always wishing it to be conquered ! :/
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Thank you so much bestie, tumhe achha laga bus aur kya chahiye π
beautiful poem, I liked the last stanza the most it has power and determination enough to won over everything
Thank you so much Cifar, such appreciation coming from you means a lot π
Beautiful take Shweta…..fighting the dark within…..repetition makes the meaning and the struggle more powerful….
Thank you so much Sunaina…your constant motivation helps me to do better π
Beautiful poem……
thank you so much π
Will be great to conquer the flame!
Nice soul-sis!
thank you so much soul-sis,really happy you liked it π
Nice one…let the fight keep going till we win!
Rightly said Alok, happy you liked it π
Oh, what happened to him? Beautiful poem, Shweta. Full of wordplay and mystic.
you mean Ravish, he wasnt too well and had to keep away from reading and writing.But am glad he is back…we can’t have friends go away for long! Thank you so much happy you liked the poem Saru π
Awesome and beautiful piece…. loved it…
Thank you Ashish, happy you liked it π