The Missing Babloo
The driver honked several times with the stipulated time for stopover at the highway closed as all other passengers hopped in the bus while Ananya stuffed the last eateries in her bag and ran waving at the driver gesturing “don’t you leave without me!”
Pushing and nudging people she reached her seat in the second last row accidently stepping on the foot of a fellow passenger making her way to the window seat, the overweight woman grumpily looking at her expecting an apology.
In the next moment “My babloo is missing!” she got up immediately, “oh I left him here….hey stop the damn bus.” She again hopped out of her seat stepping on the lady again, searching madly peeping on other passengers and seats.
Many others joined her shouting Babloo…are you there, many peeped out of the window to find him, Ananya worried, “where did I leave him, at the restaurant may be, I love him…Babloo!” the passengers asking questions started pacifying her.
Just then she looked at the cabinet on the roof above the seats and happily shouted, “Here he is!” passengers astonishingly and angrily looked on as she pulled her guitar and hugged it tight; “Is that Babloo?” she was just short of being bashed.
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Shashank portrayed Shringar beautifully, I was floored reading his master stroke, the second rasa is Hasya as in Humor, leave you hoping to spread smiles 🙂
🙂 I liked that .. where is BABLOOOoooooooooo he he he nice one
Thank you Bikram, happy you liked it 🙂 I can see you laughing from here 🙂
hahahahaahahaha Babloo the show stopper of your hilarious story hahahahahaa
Khub Saras majjanu story 🙂
Great thanks for sharing 🙂
Tamne gamyu ne bus…am happy. Sorry late reply karyo, Rio ni tabiyat saari nathi 🙁
hahaha… mazaa a gaya… bahut hi acha… 🙂
Shukriya Ashish, aapko hasi aayi…purpose met 🙂
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Really nice
Thanks.
Nice story in few sentences. 🙂
Thank you Vinitha 🙂
How come Babloo didn’t get bashed for creating so much of commotion? 🙂
hahah now that would be a twist…..bashing babloo 🙂
😀 She would sure get bashed up… ha ha ha
hahah u bet UK.
Ha ha ha.. Nice one Shweta 🙂
Thanks Anjali 🙂
Good one 🙂
Thank you Arun.
🙂 I suspect it to be a real story. 😉 🙂
I am smiling…..though I have a guitar, no Indrani its not me lol
Very nice story.:).
Cheers,
Sriram & Krithiga
Thank you Sriram and Krithiga 🙂
Hahaha, this is so cool… initially I thought Bablo was her pet only to realize the end. Superb Shweta! 🙂
hain na….wohi toh twist hai 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂
Hahahaaaaaahaaaaa. I just can’t stop laughing. Was this a real encounter by any chance Shweta? 🙂
I didn’t step on anyone’s foot in the bus Dipanwita….since i made you laugh do i get a pass for the next trekking trip 🙂
Ha ha:) Very funny:)
Thank you Amitji 🙂
So funny…:)))
Thank you Chandan 🙂
Ouch…could feel Ananya stepping on my toes! Was trying to guess Babloo…but not a Guitar!
oh my…i would be all grrr if i was stepped on twice 🙂
Haha, I expected a pet monkey for some reason!
monkey….sahi hai….I actually made people scratch their brain on Babloo!
Never ever guessed ‘Babloo’ must be a Guitar.. I thought it to be either some pet or some designer bag or something…but never a Guitar.. 🙂
and I am still having a smile on my face 🙂
oooo Designer bag….thats a cool guess too….don’t mind naming my Gucci something else 🙂 happy and hope the smile stays Arun 🙂
I was expecting a puppy.. 🙂
My pup is names Rio….babloo would be good too 🙂
As usual, it’s too good. I really salute your creation, Shweta! You are indeed a gem. Hats off to you.
and i am flying with this comment Abhijeet 🙂 thank you so so much, see you here after long and happy you liked it 🙂
Hahaha. You’re the queen of twists. I can understand her anxiety, but the poor people worried about Babloo. 😛
wow….thats awesome to read…Kiran, thank you for such an amazing compliment 🙂
Surprising twist indeed.You had us all hoodwinked Shweta.
That was the idea Indu, happy I kept up the suspense 🙂
😀 I thought it might be her dog… great read, as usual, Bestie… 🙂
My pup is a 11 week old Maltese named Rio 🙂 you loved it, my day made bestie 🙂
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I feel pity for the poor lady! She would have forgiven her sore foot if it would have been a child. I can imagine her reaction after meeting ‘Babloo’!
It’s not unusual for the musicians to name their instruments. My favorite flute was named Saudamini. 😀 it was a treble one, a# and high pitched one.
But, it indeed a Hasya Ras!
Saudamini….is such a cool name it suits the flute 🙂 happy it fitted well in the humor emotion 🙂
Wow …GREAT POST
THANKS FOR SHARING
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Thanks babe!
short and sweet….amazed at the end. Thanks for sharing 🙂
Thank you Shamsud, happy you liked it 🙂
Shweta, you brought a smile to my face. Proves your writing skills. Excellent characterisation!
yayyyiii….I loved your comment Lata 🙂 Thank you so much for such generous words…I want to write better now 🙂
people do have such attachments with certain things, nicely written
Absolutely, as they spend a lot of time with their instruments, happy you liked it 🙂
AWESOME POST , LOVED IT DEARIE 🙂
What an ending! A lovely post, dear. Had a wonderful time reading it 🙂
🙂 thank you so much Purba, happy you liked it, I wanted a punch in the end and thus felt this fitted well 🙂
Oh wow! Being a guitarist, I can understand the ‘love’. 🙂 Beautiful post, Shweta!
And I know now Bikash that you play guitar…wow…since how long, whats your style…Im still learning 🙂 have you named your guitar 🙂
Since 2012, but very informally. Now I have become serious. No, I havn’t named it yet. I think I should name it now :).
ha ha! Babloo had gone hiding! 😛
nice na Parul 🙂
Haha! That’s a nice one! 😀
thank you Deepa 🙂
Hey bestie , even I thought it to be a fog or even a stuffed toy but ….aap to aap hain :p let’s meet with your babloo this time in Forum and we are bound to get a free coffee and a piece of blueberry cakes :):) Ioved it !
This time coffee and lunch and coffee again….its going to be a long conversation bestie 🙂
Hahaha, women you know!
lol.. i thought it to be her pet.. hehe. good one. 😛
holla Ananya 😀 Navras has been such an awesome journey and flood of emotions. I remember this one being the most difficult one for me and you carried it out so effortlessly and well, bring your babloo next time 🙂 (surprisingly, despite being such a great fan of yours and adoring and reading you consistently… i haven’t written in a while here 🙁 Will, sure make up 🙂 )