Every night she would give in, surrender to his painful ways which he called making intimate love.
He would crush her, squeeze and tear her flesh night after night as her shrieks would echo the room; he would laugh feeling superior at the passionate moans.
It was when he turned his back for another carnal act when she stabbed him in the back seventeen times with a kitchen knife.
Her buried anger gave her the strength to stop the beast once and for all from killing her soul.
“My heart fills with disgust and just can’t fathom the guts the wretched woman has to kill her husband and run away”, the inspector told the constable examining the body lying naked in a pool of blood.
The start of A-Z challenge (http://www.a-to-zchallenge.
That’s Intense emotion – anger.. and good plot.
Thanks Lata, happy you liked the plot!
I read every word as if I were her – anger is powerful!
Wow, you could feel the emotion.the fiction met it’s purpose. Welcome to my blog Sue!
Anger – I know it well. Good job expressing it through your story.
Happy A to Z Challenge adventures!
Morgan,
A Poet’s Kitchen
Playing with Words
StoryDam
Thanks Morgan, a powerful feeling anger is. Happy to participate in the challenge with you 🙂
Superb expression Shweta! Good luck girl 🙂
Thanks babe…need your wishes 🙂
Anger, A lot of it pent up deep inside you is dangerous
Can’t agree more Datta!
It is a very negative and powerful feeling. Unfortunate protagonist here. Glad to have you running along me Shweta in this Challenge 🙂
It is challenging as I am not used to writing daily 🙂 I am so liking your theme too Roohi, let’s keep each other motivated through the month 🙂 and glad you like it.
Only if he understood the pain she bore for years… It’s easy for pass judgement.
Powerful writing, Shweta.
Thanks Saru, so agree only if he understood…period, most don’t 🙁
Hi,
I like the way you introduced anger. A very fitting description of how a person might react when they have been keeping anger within them.
Excellent post.
Visiting from the A to Z Blog Challenge 2015
Shalom,
Patricia at Everything Must Change
Hi Pat, am really happy you like the post, atoz challenge is challenging me enough to write daily 🙂 see you around and welcome to my blog 🙂
Reflection of extreme emotion…. perfectly weaved in five sentences.
Thank you Adi, very happy you liked it 🙂
The anger that builds up is the most dangerous and such a beautiful start capturing the emotion at its zenith in your first five sentences Ananya. I am going to love the entire month reading you here 🙂 Looking ahead writing together j 🙂
Truly Shashank, you liked it j means the emotion met its purpose..I am already loving the month writing together 🙂
Hmm stretched to the extreme. Interesting Shweta !!!
Suppressed anger burst Somali.
Yup better to express than suppress and burst later…but then it won’t make a story ..
No surprise 🙂
He had to meet his end Ravish 🙂
it happens sometimes, but more often than not we keep suffering
I so agree Aroraji, we care for a person, for society some mental blocks fear of stigma that keeps us mum as we suffer..
What else should have been the fate of him? AM not surprised.
If it were rightly addressed earlier this wouldn’t have been the result…it was suppressed anger Ajay.
very strong narrative and very apt ending. Loved it!
Thanks Gowthama, the ides of this fiction was to depict the feeling of anger 🙂
Very true! Anger destroys everything.
It surely does…. But suppressed anger is different Fayaz.
Yes, suppressed anger is like a volcano which would erupt when borders or limits are crossed.
Anger can’t be suppressed for too long… 🙂 Great start dear… 🙂
Thanks Arpita, in reality many a times care for the person holds our anger within 🙂
Gruesome
Suppressed anger 🙁 glad to have you back Tomichan sir 🙂
Good one.
Thank you Rajesh 🙂
Great post. Perfect expression of emotions.
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Thank you Anoop, haven’t seen you around, should I say welcome to my blog 🙂
Yeah Shweta, this was the first time, i got to your blog. And i must say, i am very much impressed. You are doing a great job. I am few months old in the blogging arena. Do keep in touch
She did the right thing. Loved the narration and the story 🙂
Thank you Purba, happy you liked it…5 sentences can be challenging sometimes. 🙂
Intense!
She had to give vent to all that she was bottling up, I’m sure.
Awesome job there, Shweta.
exactly babe, it had to vent one day….thanks and really happy you liked it 🙂
Anger vented out in an extreme way, but that was the need of the hour. Apt usage of the word.
Thank you Alok, happy you liked it 🙂
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It had to happen some day. Well writen, Shweta. 🙂
Thanks Vinitha, a pressure burst!
I think the police inspector’s response made me even more angry! But truth be told, considering the times we live in, that would have been the real response.
God! What a monster of a husband!
just made it as real as ) could Sreesha…life afterall.
Wonderfully written… I can feel the anger of the woman as I read the story. It’s the most dangerous emotion. Great start to the challenge 🙂
Thanks Moon, I so agree it is a dangerous emotion!
Really we need to understand peoples need and act according to it.
Who’s need here Hansnath, the man’s who was a beast or the woman who barely never said one?
Welcome to my blog 🙂
Needs of the women who barely never said any thing… Understanding women is so difficult but at-least every one should try to do this. Thanks for your welcome.
great story….the pain and then the irony
Thanks Sweta!
Right Pent up anger combined with frustration , hatred and loathing is really dangerous ..
The piece is graphic of the emotion.
A short moment of anger is enough!