T’was us t’was me and you
You promised me all my dreams come true
You promised me sunshine in winters
And be by me like autumn dew
I in turn stood by you in dusk and dawn
Took a thorny path of no return
We saw together the coming storm
I am sure you did protect me with no harm
When the storm hit me, I looked for your hand
Nowhere was your presence left me disdained
I faced the storm alone and strong
It taught me lessons of my wrong
You responded to none, my pain and my cries
Now all I wait is for this time to fly
All I look for now is strong commitment
One day, yes I wait for the day to get over this disenchantment.
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One Day 🙂 We all are waiting for that one day… When will it come?
A belief in this too shall pass Alok!
Ohw.. Touching one Shweta. I guess like you said, this too shall pass 🙂
Thank you Vinay, hope and faith is what keeps life going, isn’t it?
True love is a sorta to protect and prevent..It always as a shadow .Let be bold and strong..A sad song of a sobbing heart .As a reader of your poems i give you 8 out of ten as marks .Thank you .be more bold
Thank you for such good feedback JK.
Its a “soulful” poem in my poinion. A very nice combination of feelings and expression. Liked it very much.
Thank you Ashish, happy you liked it.
Thank you Ashish, happy you liked it.
Great poetry Shweta. I loved these lines “All I look for now is strong commitment. One day, yes I wait for the day to get over this disenchantment.”
Thank you Suresh, the problem with love is it hits quick and takes a long to recede.
Thank you Suresh, the problem with love is it hits quick and takes a long to recede.
sad but I found it hopeful too, well done
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Thanks Cifar shayar.
And one day everything will be perfectly all right 😀
That one day….a hope..Amrit.
This is poetry in motion !
Thanks Rahul….life itself is to be in motion always!
Aww !! Hopefully the Strong Commitment is bestowed.
Truly Ajay…hope is all she has 🙂