Embers remain is my attempt at Haiku to personify a burning heart.
Other Haiku attempts
Other poetess’s whose Haiku I like Bloom Smile on a deathbed
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All said and done, those embers can never be parted with. Brilliantly put Shweta!
Thank you so much Divsi, you said it all đ
Wow, this is a great idea to add in pic itself!
thanks Alok đ
Very touching.
thank you ::)
Great post! Thanks!
thank you đ
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shukriya Jyotiji đ
Love the haiku and the pic looks scary đ
Pain can be scary sometimes đ happy you liked the Haiku đ
Nice one
thank you đ
Awesome đ
thank you đ
Beautiful and different representation of words !!
thank you Yogiji đ
seeney mein sulagtey hain armaan…
Simmering…seething…intense haiku!
OK, now that you have coupled it with a picture, they have become a ‘haiga’ đ
Hope to read more of them here if this genre catches your fancy đ
Happy writing, Shweta đ
I will surely give it a try đ very happy you liked it Amitji đ
Those embers remain for life. No measure of time can effect the simmers otherwise. Amazing Shweta. Loved it. đ
yes they do and then become a part of us, thank you Dipanwita for liking it đ
Yes, always remains…
.loved this haiku.
thank you Jyotirmoy đ
Ouch…mine is burning alright!
ahhh so sorry!
The flaming heart well composed with the pic!
thank you Sunita đ
What a heart goes through and comes to can never be captured and yet here, Ani, in mere words you say it all. But then, a little sunshine and zephyr to the embers ignites a fire of passion, emotions, and love again. That’s how the hearts are. Always! Murrrray! (My poetess is back but I need more sunshine đ đ Murray again)
you always bring in Hope Shashank and with this broad sunshine too đ the zephyr then can’t be left far behind can it đ More murray to that hope đ
Traces will remain and like scars they will hurt. Nice one Shweta
yes so rightly said Sunaina đ
Heart touching one…. liked it… đ
thank you đ
The picture well accentuated your thoughts. Absolutely loved the Haiku đ
thank you so much Rajeshwari đ
amazing blog, awesome post