“Tell me you are with me and would not leave me?” Ananya firmly held on her sweaty hand on Rohan’s at the edge of the Mont. Bernard cliff.
“”Of course love, have I ever left you, we do this together ok.” Rohan coaxed with a sly grin.
She balanced her trembling feet and turned to face Rohan when he pushed her hard off the cliff with both his hands.
“Rohan………” Ananya’s scream became feeble and fugacious as she fell off the cliff.
After a deafening silence the scream returned, you brat I will not spare you, as the bungee reflexed and bounced back, “yooohooo…I so love this adventure, she exclaimed.”
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39 Comments
Outlandish love!
so unfamiliar is it?
What a climax!!! Before I could curse him fully, I was grinning 😀 Superb!!
mixed emotions there Divsi 🙂
Quite an interesting twist at the end.. you done it again
hahah thank you so much 🙂
wow, the surprise in the end was fantastic, loved it
thank you Cifar, glad to have you here after a long time 🙂
Without a speck of doubt, I would have done the same 😀 and would have laughed out loud 😛 Then would be ready with puppy eyes to defend later 😀 😀 A fabulous five sentence fiction but I am still waiting for the magic wand.
yeh right and then I surely want to see those puppy eyes! a sure spanking after that 🙂 the magic wand will make something soon, murray!
Another of your stories with a twist! Superb!
thank you Rajeevji 🙂
Leap of faith indeed ?
🙂 thank you 🙂
What a twist! Loved reading the story 🙂
thank you so much Purba for liking it 🙂
Ooh!
Another of those Dave-twists! Awesome job, Shweta!
May you love birds grow in love. 🙂
Amen to your wishes on love Dee 🙂 really happy you liked it, made my day 🙂
Hehe..,nice twist to the tale. Surprising pleasant ending. Liked it dear very much 🙂
thank you so much Bushra 🙂 very happy you liked it 🙂
Lovely. Liked the surprise ending!
thank you Kala, glad you liked it 🙂
Haha! Twist in the tale.. 🙂 Amazing! 🙂
thank you so much Saumy 🙂
Brilliant last line:)
thank you so much Rahul 🙂
The twist has twisted my mind. mind blowing.
thank you…plan to do that for most five sentence fictions Jyotirmoy 🙂
What a relief! I almost broke a sweat:(
Thank you for the life saving twist, Shweta:) But then, you are the master, it’s all in YOUR hands;)
fiction can sway the reader anywhere….imagination is free Amitji 🙂 really happy you liked it 🙂
Short and crispy .. brought me a sigh of relief at the end .. good work ..
thank you so much 🙂
Bungee-jumping it was!
Never attempted it. Have you tried?
I have a similar tale about sky-diving, soul-sis 🙂
I would love to read your version soul-sis 🙂 really happy you liked it 🙂
You pen beautiful stories. Sharp and short ones , touching the soul. Awesome writing.
Wow that was amazing. Just in a matter of five sentence, you create that suspense, thrill and love. Simply superb Shweta.
I don’t have faith in love…!
This is silly.
😀 Good one!
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Amazing..with the screams, there were chills and then.. end it was wow…