These lines are me, my fight and struggle from something that lies so deep within. Amazingly I just won another war today. I felt it grip again today morning and I knew it was culmination of recent events. You just again touched the deepest chord of my soul….
As I said on Twitter, mirror images we are! I sat to write a beautiful feeling of love and the words flowed, I didn’t stop till I penned the last. Then when I read it, it was pain in the words but some solace within! Not sure how I can describe it! But with you I don’t need to describe…
Shweta, you have vividly portrayed in your poem the fight with anxiety. Yes anxiety is natural, but we have to try our best to divert attention from anxiety as it builds up. When change is the rule why to fear it beforehand..rather face it as it comes. We should never ever let this dark demon overpower our mind and heart. Sounds too boring and preachy? Aadat hai. 🙂
What you said is so right Somali provided you know its coming and the reason its coming! I have tried to pen a the moments when this exactly happened. Its like a tsunami wave that comes unannounced and grips badly!
My God Shweta, I was numb for a moment after the read and I did not realize it .. only thing I know is that ..I don’t know what to write ! But I do know that the demon will go defeated every time . It will bow down one day in front of Minnat-e-mohobbat and minnat-e-dosti 🙂 🙂 Love n Love n Love 🙂
Anxiety has been so vividly captured, that if one can’t get what it is after reading this Ananya.. they can never get what it is. The fight, emotions, the scattered beats plunge the readers to experience it such is the power of these words. Amazingly done j. And, even to this.. i can’t resist writing- Beautiful 🙂 Powerful indeed.
So truly said j, as I told Tina, we are so into creating artificial emotions in our life camouflaging not showing our true self that acceptance to reality becomes challenging. Its dark but real 🙂 thank you for giving so much love to it.
Thanks Tina, happy you like it, a personal opinion that we have masked our emotions especially vulnerable ones with smilees and emocons so well that acceptance to reality is almost negligible.
Perfectly weaved, Shweta. The darkness of the heart returns again and again, especially in the lonesome hours. I loved the way you’ve captured the intense emotions in this poem that we all feel at such an hour.
ek sidha funda hai…. thoda sunn ne me tedha hai but it works… agar anxiety se darr lagta hai tou uuse face karo… welcome karo… jitna bhago ge, ye utna bhagaye ga…. ye ek chote bachhe ki tarah hai- aap jo bolo ge ya socho ge ye uska ulta karega…. behtar hai aakh mila ke face karo…. no nexito… no franxit… no beta blockers…. sidhi baat karo… after 2 years i am sharing my personal experience…
These are profound lines. There is something sinister in the response darkness gives where it calmly plans the next blow.
Rightly said Salvwi, its like that sarcastic smile…
These lines are me, my fight and struggle from something that lies so deep within. Amazingly I just won another war today. I felt it grip again today morning and I knew it was culmination of recent events. You just again touched the deepest chord of my soul….
As I said on Twitter, mirror images we are! I sat to write a beautiful feeling of love and the words flowed, I didn’t stop till I penned the last. Then when I read it, it was pain in the words but some solace within! Not sure how I can describe it! But with you I don’t need to describe…
Very beautifully said Shweta. Darkness should be engulfed with hope rather than anxiety.
So rightly said Fayaz, hope can turn all positive.
Shweta, you have vividly portrayed in your poem the fight with anxiety. Yes anxiety is natural, but we have to try our best to divert attention from anxiety as it builds up. When change is the rule why to fear it beforehand..rather face it as it comes. We should never ever let this dark demon overpower our mind and heart. Sounds too boring and preachy? Aadat hai. 🙂
What you said is so right Somali provided you know its coming and the reason its coming! I have tried to pen a the moments when this exactly happened. Its like a tsunami wave that comes unannounced and grips badly!
That’s a very painful situation then.
My God Shweta, I was numb for a moment after the read and I did not realize it .. only thing I know is that ..I don’t know what to write ! But I do know that the demon will go defeated every time . It will bow down one day in front of Minnat-e-mohobbat and minnat-e-dosti 🙂 🙂 Love n Love n Love 🙂
Happens bestie…till the time we don’t give in to darkness it always works. Loads of love and hugs.
Engrossing lines Shweta. It took me sometime to gather myself and type down my comment here. Im impressed with your writings!
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Thank you Meera, it reached you, means a lot.
Such a beautiful thought, Shweta. Anxiety takes away from the sunshine of life…
Rightly said Prathishta, it does sap a lot of our individuality.
this is an “exquisite”… great creativity…
Thank you Ashish.
I have nominated you for Blogger Recognition Award… check here…https://ashishvision.wordpress.com/2015/08/16/blogger-recognition-award/ 🙂
I need to make a special award of gratitude for you Ashish, I will accept this thank you so much.
Painful, isn’t it? Anxiety is exhausting! Very well done, Shweta. 🙂
Thank you Vinitha, long time 🙂
Anxiety has been so vividly captured, that if one can’t get what it is after reading this Ananya.. they can never get what it is. The fight, emotions, the scattered beats plunge the readers to experience it such is the power of these words. Amazingly done j. And, even to this.. i can’t resist writing- Beautiful 🙂 Powerful indeed.
So truly said j, as I told Tina, we are so into creating artificial emotions in our life camouflaging not showing our true self that acceptance to reality becomes challenging. Its dark but real 🙂 thank you for giving so much love to it.
Phew! That;s a very moving imagery Shweta. Very poignant and well captured.
And I see you here after so long, not that i am writing regularly 🙂 Thank you Vinay, happy to see you back.
Very touching!!! Shweta…I had never read anything like this on anxiety!! You have really captured feeling in a very vivid way!! Superb!!!
Thanks Tina, happy you like it, a personal opinion that we have masked our emotions especially vulnerable ones with smilees and emocons so well that acceptance to reality is almost negligible.
Oh god! Dark and numbing! Read it thrice. It’s very beautiful and haunting!
Yes Rakesh, somethings painful do exist…happy you liked it.
“I hug anxiety tighter than ever..now let’s be friends..”
You couldn’t have said it better, Shweta! Loved it!
Thank you Amitji, coming from you means a lot.
Beautifully penned ..
Thanks Arun 🙂
Nice one Shweta, but wish you hugged the hope:)
Yes I would Rahul so agree to that!
Well said Shweta.Simply beautiful about Anxiety.
Thanks Sri, happy you liked it.
Wow. The imagery is quite vivid! Moving poetry.
Thank you Subhodeep, glad you liked it 🙂
Lovely!
Thanks Madhusudan.
That’s very true and right Shweta Ji! But the darkness must also be exist otherwise we can not imagine the light , the hope !!
Wow that is such a beautiful thought Yogiji…so positive.
Absolutely haunting!
Indeed Shalini.
Absolutely haunting this is!
Wanted to convey it vividly Shalini.
You have pictured anxiety Shweta.
Yes Indu a feeling some vulnerability.
Beautiful poem Shweta. It is all about acceptance 🙂
Agree atleast better than giving up Roohi.
Ah, the demons we all need to learn to fight, created mostly by our own mind!
Agree only if taming the thoughts was so easy Lata 🙁
That’s a beautiful imagery Shweta.. loved the way you expressed it so poignantly :’)
Beautiful not sure but painful agree, happy you liked it!
lovely words….
Thanks sweta 🙂
I dont get it Vinay, is it some marketing you are doing on this site?
Perfectly weaved, Shweta. The darkness of the heart returns again and again, especially in the lonesome hours. I loved the way you’ve captured the intense emotions in this poem that we all feel at such an hour.
Hope guides us through. Beautiful words 🙂
ek sidha funda hai…. thoda sunn ne me tedha hai but it works… agar anxiety se darr lagta hai tou uuse face karo… welcome karo… jitna bhago ge, ye utna bhagaye ga…. ye ek chote bachhe ki tarah hai- aap jo bolo ge ya socho ge ye uska ulta karega…. behtar hai aakh mila ke face karo…. no nexito… no franxit… no beta blockers…. sidhi baat karo… after 2 years i am sharing my personal experience…